For my revised Seven Deadly Sins paper, I am trying two new conclusions. One will conclude with a prediction and the other by reviewing the key points.
Concluding with a prediction basically involves stating any concluding thoughts about the subject. In a sense you are letting the reader in on the final thoughts and opinions you have.
At sometime in everyone's, they have committed all of these sins whether they realize it or not. As seen in the mall, people can be characterized by the seven deadly sins everywhere. They may not know that they are doing what they are doing but it happens. Most events involving more than one person, also involve one of the sins. Although we may not think of these as real sins, they happen everyday.
Concluding by reviewing key points means you restate or summarize points already made in the paper, while trying not to make it too repetitive.
By taking a casual trip to the mall, it was easy to see that events involving the seven deadly sins happen all around us. Most people don't identify that these are the events happening, but they occur everywhere. They happen in times of conflict, or even in daily routine. Such as the mothers fighting for a spot in line, or the Abercrombie girl shopping at her usual store. All these events occur everyday around us.
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